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Submitted on
August 22, 2012
Image Size
13.2 MB
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4381×6572
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Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D800
Shutter Speed
1/200 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
85 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Aug 21, 2012, 7:00:04 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS5.1 Windows
Sensor Size
21mm
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Beach Fashion by janlykke Beach Fashion by janlykke
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Technique - Very well captured, good skin tones and control of highlights and shadows. Depth of focus is also spot on. Impact - The model is very attractive but to increase the impact If I were to shoot this I would have taken a lower perspective - you could make good use of the step (and get it out of the framing)- get in closer and lower. Your model has lovely long legs (which you may have noticed). They are a key feature of the image and the lower angle would have made more of them. Vision - She has a very powerful stance but it makes me wonder what she is looking at because the view as we see it is behind her. Perhaps if she faced out towards the wind turbines and you increased the DoF it would help? Originality - I think you would agree it is more of a model portfolio shot - it shows her very well (very very well infact) but it doesn't say much about you and your style, what do you want to convey through this image?
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Rob-Satanta-K Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is wonderfully natural. She's a beautiful model and I dig the subdued lighting.
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NarutoALL Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
Cool !
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